Blue fire sky

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Title: Blue fire sky
Protagonist: 28 years old woman and her brother who is 19 years old. Brother has four friedns which are same age as he is. Gentle alien from space. Alien has a big scar on forehead.
Location: Old house with beautiful garden. Forrest near by the house. Hospital and cemetary near the house.
Antagonist: Woman is shy and lovable. She has supernatural powers to read minds. Brother is outgoing, laugh a lot with his friends and likes music. Alien is friendly unlike other aliens.
Love Interest: Lots of hugging.
Confidant: Make it realistic. Persons have got drive to get through anything.
Comic Relief: Even alien evasion is scary, they´ll get through the invasion with black humor.
Conflict: Humans vs. aliens.
Outline: The woman called Sarah and her brother called Will are living in their childhood home. Aliens comes from space to abduct humans. Sarah hears them telepathicly. They have to escape home to the hospital. They meet nice alien, which have scar on the forehead. The alien helps them to get safely to the hospital. At the hospital they need to search their friend and steal insulin for Will, because he has diabetes. Next they goes to alien landing site and tries to get to the ship without anyone noticing.
Language: English
Genre: Literary Fiction
Writing Style: Stream Of Consciousness
Narrative Style: Third-person Limited - The story is told from the perspective of a single character
Author Style: Ray Bradbury: Science Fiction, Dystopian, and Allegorical